2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；复杂句采用很棒；请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性，但文中有较多拼写错误。

My views on Online shopping Now,on online shopping have became a fashtion,on online shopping have many good benifit,but,it have some problem too. with the technical and science developing,people's wanted is more and more bigest,so on onlie shopping is other important things,it is necessary for us to convinient to shopping.in my views,on online shopping have good and bad,first of all on onlie shopping is convinient for people's life .people can stay at home to purchase goods to use cell phone or computer,whenever,just you have free ,but ,we will buy poor goods on online shopping,because ,before we buy goods,we didn't know the goods of quality and recivce the goods and not sure to have good after sales gurantee,so on online shopping have good and bad.