2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My views on Online shopping Now,on online shopping have became a fashion,on online shopping have many good benefit,but,it has some problems too. with the technical and science developing,people's wanted is more and more bigest,so on online shopping is other important thing,it is necessary for us to convenient to shopping.in my views,on online shopping have good and bad,first of all on onlie shopping is convenient for people's life .people can stay at home to purchase goods to use cell phone or computer,whenever,just you have free ,but ,we will buy poor goods on online shopping,because ,before we buy goods,we didn't know the goods of quality and recivce the goods and not sure to have good after -sales guarantee,so on online shopping have good and bad.