2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；从句使用偏少；能较灵活地使用部分高级词汇，有基础拼写错误，需要注意一下。

My views on Online shopping Now,on online shopping have been became a fashion,on online shopping have many good benefit,but,it has some problems too. with the technical and science developing,people's wanted is more and more biggest,so online shopping is other important thing,it is necessary for us to convenient for shopping.in my views,on online shopping have good and bad,first of all on onlie shopping is convenient for people's life .people can stay at home to purchase goods to use cell phone or computer,whenever,just you have free ,but ,we will buy poor goods on online shopping,because ,before we buy goods,we didn't know the goods of quality and receive the goods and not sure to have good after -sales guarantee,so on online shopping have good and bad.