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Much Attention Should Be Given to the Study of Chinese In recent years,the phenomenon,many students pay less attention to learn Chinese language,rises wide concern in society.Apparently,this is a bad phenomenon causing some bad results. There are two reasons in this statement.To begin with,with the increasingly rapid economic globalization,foreign culture like American drama,South Korean drama spreads and even become popular in China.In these dramas,they spread their own country’s language,which has great impact on Chinese people,especially the young.These young people admire foreign culture,love to speak the foreign language and pay less attention to Chinese language.What's more,foreign country trends to spread their cultural awareness increasing global impact of their country.Thus,they make their cultural works fit to the young,which can spread their cultural awareness.However,this phenomenon not only decreases Chinese social impact,but also unbenefit to carry forward the Chinese culture.Carrying forward the Chinese language is the key of developing Chinese culture. To sum up,this phenomenon is unbenefit to Chinese development in future.In my opinion,much attention should be given to the study of Chinese language.As to this issue,I advise that government should propogenda the importance of learning Chinese language,encourage people to participate in activities like Chinese cultural knowledge contests and decrease the significance of learning foreign language in senior middle school.