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Nowadays domestic persons celebrate western festival increasingly.For example,thanks-giving day,christims or hollowen.At those festival, they shop ,enioy feasts,just as celebrate chinese traditional festival. Those reasons can explain this phononme,first,beascue of the globalization.As the communciation with western countries is rising,more and more persons touch western culture. second,as a english major I think many students learn english at very early age.So they can learn about western culture.Then I think many shops will decorate at those western festivals,people will be attract then enjoy those festivals. Celebrations of western festival can bring about some results.the positive aspects includes promoting domestic economy and promote the commuciation with western country.however,people will pay less attention on traditional festivals,especially the young gengeration,they may ignore the tradtional culture.
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