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安徽黄山被联合国教科文组织定为世界自然文化遗产。假设外国友人到你校参观后，准备去旅游。
请根据要点向外国友人简单介绍黄山（the Yellow Mountain ）。
（1）位于安徽南部，是中国著名的旅游胜地。每年有大批中外游客前去旅游观光。
（2）乘汽车去大约要花 3 个小时；也可以乘火车或飞机去。
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hello everyone .let me tell you a good place to visit that is the yellow Mountain. the Yellow Mountain lies in AN hui prouvicins .its very famous .every year many tourisits come here to visit it . it takes about three hours by bus during the jounry. you also can take trains or planes to there. climbing climbing the Yellow Mountain is relaxing. you can enjoy the sea of clouds the wondrous pines and unique rocks and so on the best thing is that you can enjoy the sun rise in the morning
