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in my opinion, the most beautiful city in China is Hang Zhou. But if i have to take around my foreign friend, i will take him to go to Guang zhou, because it is near my hometown. Guang zhou, one of the three biggest city in China, it belongs to the southern part in the map. it has big area sea, and it is near Hongkong and Tai wan. the transportation here is very conviously, and the industy is very develop too. employees from the contry come here to get their job with high salary. also there are so many workers in the factury. Guang zhou always hold the important conferences. people from the word come here to take part in it.
