2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

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The impact of the Internet on interpersonal communication one person live in the world .she must need to talk to others.In ancient society,people communicate with others face to face .but with the improvement of society ,people invented the Internet .Gradually,people communicate with others use the computer througth the Internet. instead of talking to others face to face . As far as I am concerned,the invention of the Internet is bad for the interpersonal communication .Because firstly it makes many people spend most of their time in staying at home .lacking of exercise, which makes their health become very weak.Second due to lacking of the talk to people face to face ,making people do not how to deal with the situation when they are facing people . Above all are my own opinions .