作者能较灵活地使用高级词汇,但单词拼写要认真;全文结构较为严谨;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错。
In rencent years, it's universally aknowledged that the problem of ingnorance of Chinese learning has arosed increasingly greater and wider concern among the public. On the contrary, students prefer to learn English rather than Chinese. Obviously, it's an embarassing phenomenon in our modernized and industralized country. However, what reasons are cause this phenomenon? I'll explain it word by word. To began with, due to our mother tongue, Chinese, students are give few emphasis on Chinese whom thought have been already familiar with it. and the majority of families and teachers fail to guide students enhance study of Chinese so that promote our culture to all over the world. Moreover, as economic and technology develop rapidly, globalization has become the current trend in the world. So numerous companes are need the talents of foreign trade. In oreder to follow the trend, a number of people tend to learn foreign language. That's to say the disregard of Chinese learning result from above reasons. To sum up, we ought to keep Chinese learing and promote our culture to change the phonomenon. For cultural department, they should enhance propaganda our chinese culture to attract student's attention from Chinese. At the same time, parents and teacher can make students enjoy chinese culture in many ways and let them know mastering mother tongue is very important to them.