2006年6月英语四级作文真题:招募志愿者

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

Dear Judy, I am writing this letter for the purpose of expressing my genuine gratitude for your kind help during my stay in your country. When I went to your country for a tour,I found that the environment was so different from my hometown that I felt nervous,lonely and did not know what to do next.Fortunately,I met you in due course.It was your generous help that pulled me out from the shade and gave me a precious chance to know American culture.Finally,I spent a joyful vacation smoothly. Again,please accept my heartfelt appreciation.If I can be of any help,please let me know. Yours sincerely Zhang Wei