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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；句式变化多样；文中能较恰当地使用高级词汇，但存在较多拼写错误。
These day,technical and science is developing,informetion tools is developing,the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face to face contact.the picture show that the couples communicate with their son on internet,asolutely,people rely on internet to communicate,not face to face to communicate with others,but use computer to face to face to communicate with others,It wii be a lack of loves,at the same time will lead to family together and a few time,so I think of that people should be communicate with their family to face to face,and increase sweeted in their home,let us feel more and more happiness.in this way we have a good life,in other hand,when we have no free to go home,we can communicate with famaily at sometimes.but we try to company with famaily at more times.
