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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12896
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用;文中能较灵活地使用高级词汇,但词汇量积累还要努��。

用户练习作文:

These days,technical and science are developing,information tools are developing,the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face to face contact.the picture show that the couples communicate with their son on internet,asolutely,people rely on internet to communicate,not face to face to communicate with others,but use computer to face to face to communicate with others,It wii be a lack of loves,at the same time will lead to family together and a little time,so I think of that people should be communicate with their family to face to face,and increase sweet in their home,let us feel more and more happiness.in this way we have a good life,on the other hand,when we have no free to go home,we can communicate with family sometimes.nevertheless we try to keep family company at more times.

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