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2011年专四作文真题:私家车是否应该交污染税

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要求：: 题目 Should Private Car Owners Be Taxed For Pollution?
说明 Recently government agencies in some big cities have been studying the possibility of putting a “pollution tax” on private cars. The amount of private car owners would depend on the emission levels, i.e. engine or vehicle size. This has caused quite a stir among the public. Some regard it as an effective way to control of the number of cars and reduce pollution in the city. But others don’t think so. What’s your opinion? Should Private Car Owners Be Taxed For Pollution?
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1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数：200满分：100分

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拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅。

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