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中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar
赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake从句数量偏少;作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。
The Mid-autumn festival in 15th August Lunar calendar, it is one of the traditional festivals in China. In that day,all the family members together,we enjoy the full moon and eat moon cake,talking with our family about our life or our study. We often take a trip and visit our friends or relatives,A party would be arranged in that day. I like this festival.