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高一英语作文模拟题:家庭旅馆

发布时间:2013-05-16 16:11浏览次数:3645
要求:
假设你是李华,你的美国笔友George来信询问你家乡的家庭旅馆的情况, 打算今年暑假在这种旅馆住一段时间。请你给他回信介绍, 具体内容如下:  
价格:单人间每天30元;双人间每人每天20元;餐费每人每天20元。     
价格:和住户主人一家一起吃中餐,有菜单,可点菜, 也可以自己做饭。     
价格:海水浴、游泳、登山,不付工资的温室劳动(自愿) 说明补充:近距离了解中国,还可以感受到家庭气氛  
注意:
1. 短文必须包括表格中的所有内容, 可以适当增加细节,使其连贯;  
2. 开头已给出;
3 词数:100左右; 
4. 参考词汇: 家庭旅馆 household hotel。 
用户的作文(系统评分63.5分
评语:

作者词汇量积累很好,学术词汇积累要重视;文章层次较为清晰;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩。

用户练习作文:

Last month, I went to Xiamen with my daughter who was nine-year-old. I lived in a family hotel. It was close to the sea with traffic convenience, but I didn't enjoy it. The room was booked by me was better than we lived actually. Two young girls, one young boy and an old woman managed the hotel, they did never clean the room during we lived there. The old woman listened to the radio with a terrible old set everyday, one young girl was sitting behind the count with her head down. They were not sad, but they never smiled. Our room was untidy more and more, I coundn't bear that, so I had to sweep it myself. On the final day we live there, my daughter wetted the bed, i asked the waiters for a suit of fresh bedding, the old woman not only refused me but also got angry, she looked at my daughter rudely and complained loudly. This is a beautiful city, I like it, but I don't want to be there more.

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