题目 Should parents send their kids to art classes?
要求
1.对这种做法有人表示支持拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。
Should parents send their kids to art classes? Nowadays,the phenomenon,more and more parents send their kids to art classes,riches wide concern in society.However,there are two different views of this behavior,some agree and the others disagree. The people support the behavior for the reason that society needs an intellectual with all kinds of practical abilities.Thus,in order to make their kids seek for future's jobs easier,they should send their kids to art classes to learn more things.What’s more,having art classes can improve kids’elegant quality as well as perfect themselves. However,the others argue that parents have no privilege to force their kids to learn what their kids dislike.As is human nature,children should have their pure and innocent childhood instead of busy all the time.Therefore,children have their own privilege to choose what they want to do. Admittedly,these two different views have their different reasons.However,in my opinion,I agree with the view that parent should send their kids to art classes with a necessary condition that the kids should learn their favourite.Because they can not only choose to do what they want to do,but also perfect themselves in favour of future’s job seeking.
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