2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

作者词汇表达不够多样，希望能多使用高级词汇；使用了简单的从句；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

Dear, I am write the letter for you about show you my hometown Guizhou.Guizhou is a very beautiful city.It has many famous places likes HuangGuoShu falls.If you travel there,you will feel relexed because people who living the city is so simple.And you will not want to leave.Guizhou has many difference nation such as Buyi race,Miao race.Difference nation culture collect there.