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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12884
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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文中衔接词丰富;能够使用一些不错的从句;请作者加强词汇表达的灵活性,但文中有较多拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

Now,computer already beceme a part of our life.More and more person need it to work or paly games.Children who play internet games will hate go to school to study,because they only want to play games.And,ont only children like play games,also adult indulge the computer.They aways face to the computer all day,when people want to communicate with them.I hope they can stay away from computer and face to face to communicate with others sometimes.Last but not least,I hope they can chat with thire parents,althought thire parents always talk about some broing tops.If you can not do that,you can do what when you parents talk with you,you should stop play games to listen to them.

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