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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12903
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;句式变化较为明显,句法基础不错;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,高级词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。

用户练习作文:

Now,computer already became a part of our life.More and more people need it to work or paly games.Children who play internet games will hate to go to school to study,because they only want to play games.And,not only children like to play games,also adult indulge the computer.They face to the computer all day,when people want to communicate with them.I hope they can stay away from computer and face to face to communicate with others sometimes.Last but not least,I hope they can chat with thire parents,althought thire parents always talk about some broing tops.If you can not do that,you can do what when your parents talk with you,you should stop play games to listen to them.

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