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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；句式变化较为明显，另外句法层面做的不错；作者能较灵活地使用词汇，高级词汇使用较恰当，但存在一些拼写错误。
Now,computer already became a part of our life.More and more people need it to work or paly games.Children who play internet games will hate to go to school to study,because they only want to play games.And,not only children like to play games,also adult indulge the computer.They face to the computer all day,when people want to communicate with them.I hope they can stay away from computer and face to face to communicate with others sometimes.Last but not least,I hope they can chat with their parents,althought their parents always talk about some broing tops.If you cannot do that,you can do what when your parents talk with you,you should stop play games to listen to them.
