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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；文中词汇表达丰富度不足，一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活。
Now,computer already became a part of our life.More and more people need it to work or play games.Children who play internet games will hate to go to school to study,because they only want to play games.And,not only children like to play games,also adult like the computer.They face to the computer all day,when people want to communicate with them.I hope they can stay away from computer and face to face to communicate with others sometimes.Last but not least,I hope they can chat with their parents,althought their parents always talk about some boring tops.If you cannot do that,you can do what when your parents talk with you,you should stoping play games to listen to them.
