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Dear Jane, I’m very glad to hear from you. think you help. My English is impore qurlity.My classmate is very friendly . my is very hard. I think my is like English .but I have many qulishoins and I don,t debate it. Please write to me soon and tell me all about yourself. Yours, Xiao Hua
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