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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6301
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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文章结构严谨,有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;若注意一些语法错误,文章会更漂亮;部分高级词汇用的不错,但拼写检查还需加强。

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With the advance of society,life being richer and better,while people are loseing trust each other and geting indefferent.As failure on maintaining trust makes,we will also fail to construct a harmony of society.Consequently,we have to make suffitient efforts to over barriers in people's herats and rebuild trust. resently,it is terrible news that have speaded widely on the media and internete,which extremly hurts these who get into trouble and are blamed just due to help others.We often hear the word “pengci”,which some pretend to fall down to make money and claime one who help him stand up made him fall.Kindness shoud think highly,on the contrary,people sometimes have pay for their kindness.More seriously,these make people lose trust. To maitain trust,there will be a law to pretect these kind people and punish these violate laws and break trust.In a word, learn to trust others.

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