题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;作者句法知识较为扎实,可增加复合句和从句使用;部分高级词汇也能熟练使用,但文中有较多拼写错误。
With the advance of society,life being richer and better,while people are loseing trust each other and geting indifferent.As failure on maintaining trust makes,we will also fail to construct a harmony of society.Consequently,we have to make sufficient efforts to over barriers in people's hearts and rebuild trust. resently,it is terrible news that have speaded widely on the media and internete,which extremly hurts these who get into troubles that are blamed to do something terrible just due to helping others.We often hear the word “pengci”,which some pretend to fall down to make money and claim one who help him stand up made him fall down.Kindness should think highly,on the contrary,people sometimes have to pay for their kindness.More seriously,these make people lose trust. To maitain trust,there will be a law to pretect these kind people and punish these who violate laws and murder trust.In a word, learn to trust others.