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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6301
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;文中一些高级词汇的使用比较灵活,但请注意单词拼写的检查。

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With the advance of society,life being richer and better,while people are loseing trust each other and geting indifferent.As failure on maintaining trust makes,we will also fail to construct a harmony of society.Consequently,we have to make sufficient efforts to over barriers in people's hearts and rebuild trust. Recently,it is terrible news that have speaded widely on the media and internete,which extremly hurt these who get into troubles that are blamed to do something terrible just due to helping others.We often hear the word “pengci”,which some pretend to fall down to make money and claim one who help him stand up made him fall down.While unfortunately these bad men don't realize the consequence that make kind people are afraid of helping others. Kindness should think highly,on the contrary,people sometimes have to pay for their kindness.More seriously,these make people lose trust.To maitain trust,there will be a law to protect these kind people and punish these who violate laws and murder trust.In a word, learn to trust others.

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