题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;作者能较好的使用一些高级词汇,同时要避免个别拼写错误。
With the advance of society,life being richer and better,while people are losing trust each other and geting indifferent.As failure on maintaining trust makes,we will also fail to construct a harmony of society.Consequently,we have to make sufficient efforts to over barriers in people's hearts and rebuild trust. Recently,it is terrible news that have speaded widely on the media and internete,which extremely hurt these who get into troubles that are blamed to do something terrible just due to helping others.We often hear the word “pengci”,which some pretend to fall down to make money and claim one who help him stand up made him fall down.While unfortunately these bad men don't realize the consequence that makes kind people are afraid of helping others. Kindness should think highly,on the contrary,people sometimes have to pay for their kindness.More seriously,these make people lose trust.To maintain trust,there will be a law to protect these kind people and punish these who violate laws and murder trust.In a word, learn to trust others.