单词拼写做的不错,文中词汇表达贫乏;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
I study at NO.2 Guangchen middle school.My school is very beautiful.There has a teaching building,a dining hall and a playground.The playground is so big.There are 100 classrooms in the teaching building.We have three music rooms ,two computer rooms and a reading room.There has a lot of books in the reading room .I love my school.