正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;单词拼写做的不错,文中词汇表达贫乏;建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用。
I study at NO2 Guangchen middle school.My school is very beautiful.There is a teaching building,a dining hall and a playground.The playground is so big.There are 100 classrooms in the teaching building.We have three music rooms,two computer rooms and a reading room.There are many books in the reading room.I love my school.