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Dear Mr.Zhu, I am writing the letter for the purpose of recommending to you Yu,one of my best friends,who would like to find a position of sales manager in our corporation. As far as I know,his qualifications just amply meet our corporation's requirements.To begin with,his previous working experience has helped to lay a solid foundation for the work here.In addtion,he enthusiastic and ambitious young man with great potential.Finally,you can also refer to the resume attached for more information about him. Thank you for your due attention to this letter.I genuinely hope that you could schedule an interview with him at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely Zhang Wei