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雅思TASK1小作文模拟题:环境 Environment

发布时间:2013-07-10 16:40浏览次数:1215
要求:

The graph contains information about the population of birds in Europe over a period of twenty four years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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可将文中的简单句转换为长句或者复杂句;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,更能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

用户练习作文:

We can see the population of birds in the graph over the twenty four years that is declining a half range of it .What are the problems with the birds? Let's think about it. In the past serval years, with the developing of the economy,we also live in a more comfortable and convenient life.Nonetheless, our great environment passed away.People over-use the resoures due to the global warming,water pollution,air pollution and so on.Our river isn't clear anymore while the sky isn't blue any longer,and the wild animals haven't theirs home...They lost the place to live and they lost the water to drinking.. Then?They lost their life.Such as birds.The amount of birds faces to a problem which is the suitable place they live .In my mind,that all the problem depend on people's option.People should protect our environment like our presents which we love.To sum up,if the environment superior tonow,and step by step.Everything will continue to the been primariy.

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