加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;文章用词太过单一,且单词拼写错误较多。
My new teacher My name is Alice.My new teacher is zhao mingming. She's very beautiful .She's like's yellow and green.Today, She with me:"What color do you like,Alice?""Sorry,Could you piease say that again?""Oh,What color do you like?""Sorry,I like black and white.And you?""HA,HA!I like yellow and green."That's vey interesting,I love her very much!