小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

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Jim's family This is a photo of Jim's family.This is Jim,He's 12 years old.He is student.He like soccer ball and basketball.Those are Jim's parents.That's Jim's mother,Lucy.She's very interesting and nice.She is teacher.She like watch TV.That's Jim's father,Tom.He work is doctor.He like football and baseball.How much will Jim's charge for one day?Ah...It's not bad.That's a Jim's family!Jim like his family very much!