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Just as a saying"It is unwise to jump to conclusions upon seeing or hearing something."To put it in another way,we people as a whole can't judge one thing only by their appearance before knowing compeletely. Some reasons can be found to support my arguments.To begin with,what you see or hear can't reflect the true fact properly,which maybe cause an unbelieveable failure especially when it comes to important events.For example,if you want to learn swimming which looks like very hard and dangerous,then you should practice in the poor instead of thinking on land.Trying by yourself and finding it is interesting will be a perfect experience in your life.In addition,practicing plays indispensable role in coming to conclusions that not just need hear or see.Only if you take care of every detail in process,can you get a great result in your career. From what we have discussed above,we can safety come to the fact that it is unachieved to have conclusions upon seeing or hearing something.Only in this way can we have a promising future!
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