2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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There are severai beautify city in every county.Every people have different city in their heart. In china,there are many famous city to travel,like,beijing,shanghai,nanjing,xiang......Where has many intersting and beautiful areas,and attract thusands of people to invist.maybe many people consider where is special beautiful.However,I think the most beautify city is my hometown.Even if it is not very beautiful. my hometown is sihong,where has a lot of water,and aquatic product.my hometown is not large,but it include many things,as common saying ‘The sparrow may be small but it has all the vital organs’. In history,many famous people come to there,and give high praise.