2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，高级词汇使用稍显不足。

Now,phones already became a part of our life.It let us to communicate with person who living the other place.And it can help us to work well such as we can get the flesh news at first.But no one thing is prefect.Phones make our life more simple and convenient but give us some wrong yet.More and more people are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see.In my opinion,I think that people can play phone when they are boring but they should pay atantion to their side whether stand their friend or family.I hope we can chat with our family and friends face to face.