2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者词汇表达较为熟练，高级词汇使用不是很多；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩。

Now,phones already became a part of our life.It let us communicate with person who living the other place.And it can help us to work well such as we can get the fresh news at first time.But no one thing is prefect.Phones make our life more simple and convenient but give us some wrong yet.More and more people are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see.In my opinion,I think that people can play phone when they are boring but they should pay attention to their side whether stand their friend or family.I hope we can chat with our family and friends face to face.