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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9042
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累高级词汇,拼写错误也要注意。

用户练习作文:

Now,we live in a world that has internet,then we have to gain knowledge about internet.The internet on learning not only let us gain more diffirent knowledge,but also makes us to go to the international country.Not only that,we can get the fresh news about culture at frist time.We could communicate with others who was interested in the tops,and change our mind to other people.The way of study is so useful that students can get more knowledge and to provide their grands.So in my opinion,internet on learning is good for student to study.

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