2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

Dear Mr.Zhu, I am writing the letter for the purpose of recommending to you Yu,one of my best friends,who would like to find a position of sales manager in our corporation. As far as I know,his qualifications just amply meet our corporation's requirements.To begin with,his previous working experience has helped to lay a solid foundation for the work here.In addition,he is an enthusiastic and ambitious young man with great potential.Finally,you can also refer to the resume attached for more information about him. Thank you for your due attention to this letter.I genuinely hope that you could schedule an interview with him at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely Zhang Wei