高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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my hometown is very beautiful.I grown up in the mountain village.the village have many beautiful flower and the stream.the stream very clear ,on the behind have flower and grass.the stream have much the water animals .I have no forgive the view.but now .the beautiful view no find. the stream have not the water animals . I not find the flowers and grass.the change is reduce pollution .have air polluting and so on .I hope the my hometown can change .