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语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；句式变化多样；作者词汇表达不够丰富，另外要仔细检查词汇的拼写。
happiness is not the absence of problems,but the ability to deal with them at present,as the socilal pressuer is heavier and heavier ,many people begin to rethink themselves ,and began to search the original happiness. so ,slowly by slowly,humans start to find happinese,they find if they have a high salary or idenfy which is ackowledged by a large number of people. as far as I am concerned,happiness is not the absence of problems,but the ability to deal with them .only by working harder and harder ,can we own our own happiness.
