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People always say that the thing you see is true,but at most time the thing you see is just an aspect of the truth.So making decisions only by the thing you have seen and heard is not wise. Therefore, to make a right decision we should not only use our eyes and ears but also should use our heart and brain.For example, nowadays the liars are more and more sly.They may crash a car on purpdse and then they extort money from the owner of the car. If people around the spot just believe their eyes and ears, the cheats may succeed.But if people can think about the hole thing and call the polise,the liar might run away. The case above tall us making decisions just depend on the thing who see and hear is not believable. To do a right chose, listen to your heart and follow your thing,then you may be a better man.
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