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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40881
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分62.5分
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过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文章词汇表达比较丰富,但高级词汇稍显欠缺,此外拼写检查要重视。

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People always say that the thing you see is true,but at most time the thing you see is just an aspect of the truth.So making decisions only by the thing you have seen and heard is not wise. Therefore, to make a right decision we should not only use our eyes and ears but also should use our heart and brain.For example, nowadays the liars are more and more sly.They may crash a car on purpdse and then they extort money from the owner of the car. If people around the spot just believe their eyes and ears, the cheats may succeed.But if people can think about the hole thing and call the polise,the liar might run away. The case above tall us making decisions just depend on the thing who see and hear is not believable. To do a right chose, listen to your heart and follow your thing,then you may be a better man.

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