2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题(74)写作:最好的朋友Lucy

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Lucy is my best friend. She is very generous . She is willing to share anything with others. She is very helpful, and likes to help people in need . She has a good sense of humour . She is also good at telling funny jokes to make everyone laugh . She always helps classmates to solve problems , so everyone wants to make friends with her . When she grows up, she wants to be a social worker to help more people .