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Nowadays ,with the development of tourism,many people would like to spend more time and money on traveling.But at the same time,it arouses some problems obout tourism,that is,tourism will bring harm to the environment. There are some reasons about why tourism will do harm to the environment.First,because of the need to exploit tourist area,so many forests may be damaged badly.Second,as we all know,more and more people tend to traveling at their spare time and they will leave much litter especially white trash accordingly.Like what we see on the TV,mang tourists leave the sight without rubbish so ,our environment will be destroyed. In a word,though we know tourism will do a lot harm to our environment,we can't shut it down.So we should pay more attention to how to deal with litter after we leave the tourist area .And the exploitation of the tourist area should be well-planned.