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2009年专四作文真题:旅游对环境的影响

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:45浏览次数:9975
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题目 Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment?
说明 Tourism is a booming business in China. However, some people worry that too many tourists may bring harm to the environment, while others don’t think so.What is your opinion?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
字数:200满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分75.0分
评语:

过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些高级词汇。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays ,with the development of tourism,many people would like to spend more time and money on traveling.But at the same time,it arouses some problems obout tourism,that is,tourism will bring harm to the environment. There are some reasons about why tourism will do harm to the environment.First,because of the need to exploit tourist area,so many forests may be damaged badly.Second,as we all know,more and more people tend to traveling at their spare time and they will leave much litter especially white trash accordingly.Like what we see on the TV,mang tourists leave the sight without rubbish so ,our environment will be destroyed. In a word,though we know tourism will do a lot harm to our environment,we can't shut it down.So we should pay more attention to how to deal with litter after we leave the tourist area .And the exploitation of the tourist area should be well-planned.

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