2009年专四作文真题:旅游对环境的影响

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

Nowadays,with the development of tourism,many people would like to spend more time and money on traveling.But at the same time,it cause some problems obout tourism,that is,tourism will bring harm to the environment. There are some reasons why tourism will do harm to the environment.First,because of the need to exploit tourist area,so many forests may be damaged badly.Second,as we all know,more and more people tend to travel at their spare time and they will leave much litter especially white trash accordingly.Like what we see on the TV,many tourists leave the sight without rubbish so ,our environment will be destroyed. In a word,though we know tourism will do a lot harm to our environment,we can't shut it down.So we should pay more attention to how to deal with litter after we leave the tourist area .And the exploitation of the tourist area should be well-planned.