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作者词汇表达较为熟练，高级词汇使用不是很多；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章上下文衔接自然。
Shakespeare said that others know name, as was caught in a corner of the soul. From this we can see the importance of the name. As far as I'm concerned, the name is a gift given by parents, it's a very important thing in one's life! Twenty years ago, a little girl came into this world. Her parents were so happy! You know a few months ago they began to think about the baby's name, even they didn't know the gender of it! In China, the name of the person showed the parents' love and hope. At last they called the girl Xie Juan, yes! The little girl was me! "Xie" it is my family name and "Juan" in Chinese mines graceful, gentle, and beautiful. I love my name it showed the love and hope from my parents, it is a pity that I was not graceful and gentle. On the other hand I thought a name was a mark, distinguished you from others. Even there are lots of the same names in the world. However, you can enrich the content of your "mark" makes it different from others. We all knew that that there was not the second Shakespeare in the world, wasn't it? The most important is that in the eyes of the person who loved you, you are the only! I thank my parents for giving me the gift--my name and it let me became a unique person in the world!
