2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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If my foreign friend is going to my hometown,I would like to take him to travel around.My hometown is a attractive place where is cool in summer and warm in winter.There has yellow beach , blue sea and warm sunshine.people who likes swimming would love here and enjoy himself.Every summer holiday,thousands of visitors come here for a vacation.Surfing on the water is like flying in the sky.That is exciting.What's more, you can find all kinds of food and fruit here,such as cancers,fishes and so on.My friend can miss them. Finally,I would like to take him to the local people's house to feel the different of the tradition. Surely,this is an unforgettable and value journey.My friend will enjoy it himself.