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2001年1月英语六级作文真题:面试成功的因素

发布时间:2013-05-14 19:08浏览次数:2299
要求:

Directions:  For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Succeed in a Job Interview? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 

1. 面试在求职过程中的作用  

2. 取得面试成功的因素:仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是……   

用户的作文(系统评分64.5分
评语:

句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;全文结构较为严谨;请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度,单词拼写方面要认真。

用户练习作文:

As we know,job interview is very important for everyone.The job interview can give the boss or interviewer the first view about youself.A good view is so important for the boss to choose his stuff.Even we can say it's deciding whether can you get the job you want. And how to succeed in a job interview? There are many factors during the job interview have the important functions,such as face,clothes,knwledge,confident,and so on.You clothes can show you attitude about the job interview or life,it's can help the boss to choose a rigorous stuff.Condifent can show part of your function during the emergency.But the most important factors that decide whether can you get the job is you ability about the job. So, do the best of these,the good job is yours!

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