小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My good friend is a beautifull girl.She is like to sing and dancing.Everyday we go to school totgether by bus. We are same classes. She is be good at ENGLISH,I am be good at math, We often help eath other in studay.In the class over,we are play tootball.we are a golde friend.