2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

文中有几处错误的句子，部分句子偏简单；请作者增加词汇丰富度，加强拼写检查；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

A famous person keeps a saying that put all eggs in one basket is unwise.I just aggren with it.Put all eggs togather means hold a big danger.It is exactly an advisable choice.The correct method is disperse the risk. This is to say we should have a plan B. For example in our life, we have to find a job after our school life. While how to get a good position is a important. We have to send many resume to many camplys. We won't put our resume in just one corporation on account of it is not proper to put all eggs in one basket.We should think twice before acting.We have to ponder deeply over the multiple factors and the best solution.So that we can come to an appropriate conclusion. The case above reveals a truth that putting all eggs in one basket is unwise.We should have more choice to select.In this way we can live much calmly.