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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10396
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

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A famous person keeps a saying that putting all eggs in one basket is unwise.I just agree with it.Putting all eggs together means holding a big danger.It is exactly an advisable choice.The correct method is dispersing the risk. This is to say we should have a plan B. For example in our life, we have to find a job after our school life.How to get a good position is important. We have to send many resumes to many companies. We won't put our resume in just one corporation on account of it is not proper to put all eggs in one basket.We should think twice before acting.We have to ponder deeply over the multiple factors and the best solution.So that we can come to an appropriate conclusion. The case above reveals a truth that putting all eggs in one basket is unwise.We should have more choice to select.In this way we can live much calmly.

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